can you please tell me if ive made any mistakes? it was given to me in english and i had to translate it into italian. thanks!

do you (tu) pay attention at school?
Fai attenzione a scuola?

We root for the patriots
Facciamo il tifo per il patriots.

I make noise at home.
Faccio Fumore a casa.

Saturday they have a picnic.
Sabato fanno un picnic.

Sunday he has a party at 8:00 (write out time)
Domenica fa una festa alle otto

We want to ask a question.
Vogliamo fare una domanda.

I dont like carrots; they are discusting.
Non mi piacciono le carote; fanno schifo.

After school, you (voi) have a snack.
dopo la scuola, fate uno spuntino.

When he have to pee, Carlo says to the teacher “Can i go to the bathroom?”
Quando deve fare la pipi(`), carlo dice a professoressa “posso andare in bagno?”