per la casa

can you check my italian homework?
can you please tell me if ive made any mistakes? it was given to me in english and i had to translate it into italian. thanks!
do you (tu) pay attention at school?
Fai attenzione a scuola?
We root for the patriots
Facciamo il tifo per il patriots.
I make noise at home.
Faccio Fumore a casa.
Saturday they have a picnic.
Sabato fanno un picnic.
Sunday he has a party at 8:00 (write out time)
Domenica fa una festa alle otto
We want to ask a question.
Vogliamo fare una domanda.
I dont like carrots; they are discusting.
Non mi piacciono le carote; fanno schifo.
After school, you (voi) have a snack.
dopo la scuola, fate uno spuntino.
When he have to pee, Carlo says to the teacher “Can i go to the bathroom?”
Quando deve fare la pipi(`), carlo dice a professoressa “posso andare in bagno?”
1]right
2]facciamo il tifo per i patrioti
3]faccio rumore a casa
4]right
5]right or ”[egli] da una festa
6]right
7]right! very good
8]right.
u very good at italian.
9]carlo dice ^^alla^^ ……………….
perfect!
CERTI CHIAMATI ROMANES VANNO LA CASA?